Journey

Way back in September, we started the blog with a few possible titles and asked for suggestions. The exclamation points started flyin' when Aaron Becker's Journey was not on the list. Outrage! Horror! Well, sometimes books don't make it to the hinterlands of not-New York and not-Boston, and I had some scrambling to do. I'm so glad I did. Keeping with the theme of Wordless Week, I will now use a zillion words to talk about one wordless 40-page book.

When I first looked, I was astounded to read on the copyright page (thank you, publishers that put information about art on the copyright page!) that the art was created in pen and ink and watercolor. Watercolor. Becker created a world that is both large and lush and filled with teeny details, details that are difficult to achieve in such a loose medium. And pen and ink. That's a tricky medium, too, and there are a LOT of TEENY lines in these illustrations. I visited Becker's website and watched the video about how this project was created and was mesmerized by the lines and color he employed.

The story is a familiar one--a little girl creating her world with one red pen. But, what a world it is! In the beginning, her world is a flat, dull, brownish gray place. Her family is busy (reminiscent of John Rocco's Blackout) with phones, computers, and other devices. The opening spread has only the slightest touch of color: her red scooter, a boy's purple chalk, and a purple bird flying over skyscrapers. There are no borders, but the boxes that show the rooms of the house create a boundary of their own. And the cutaway of the house extends to show the sewers of the city and the basement of the house, complete with water heaters and other machinery. Turn the page (and you DO want to turn these pages!) and all boundaries are stripped away as the girl tries to pull her busy family away from their devices with a red scooter, red kite, and red ball. Dejected, she returns to her room, which is all straight lines: walls, door, window, even the beam of light. The only things that are not angular are an air balloon suspended from the ceiling, the continents drawn on the map on the wall, a sleeping cat, and the girl herself. Hints of things to come.

When the napping cat leaves, a piece of red chalk is revealed, and then the story really gets going. The girl, like Harold, draws on her white wall and creates a portal into another world, a world carefully constructed by the illustrator. When she runs through the red door, the page turn creates a Wizard of Oz moment, where all the world is lush and green and light and hung with blue lanterns. The red door reveals the dull brown world left behind.

Rather than drag you, one eyeball at a time, through each page turn, I bring to your attention the pages where the girl draws new things, which employ a tremendous amount of white space (for her to draw on) and the girl is shown three times on that white page, making her new drawings. She draws a boat, a hot-air balloon, a magic carpet, and, finally, a bicycle built for two (remember that boy from the very first spread?).

As she visits these magical lands, Becker creates a world full of detail worthy of David Macaulay's best work. The reader moves closer and closer as the story progresses, starting with the amazingly detailed view of a castle with its moats and waterways, then to the air where she discovers a steampunk (I think I am using this term correctly) vehicle filled with hunters who catch the purple bird (remember the bird from the first spread?). While in this vehicle, the perspective is close indeed, showing the gargantuan size of the flying machine when the tiny soldiers are marching across a bridge. When the red chalk is lost, the girl's world goes dull again until the freed purple bird, drenched in a red sky, returns it.

It's just all so glorious, and I know the committee is going to enjoy poring over every single detail. There is such a pleasure in seeing new things, making unusual connections, and swimming in art that tells a story. And we all love the feeling of discovering a new artist with a style we have never seen before.

So:

Here is the part of the criteria I think the committee will address with this one:


  1. “Distinguished” is defined as:


    1. Marked by eminence and distinction; noted for significant achievement.

    2. Marked by excellence in quality.

    3. Marked by conspicuous excellence or eminence.

    4. Individually distinct.




Check, check, check, and, especially on d, check. Since we are talking about many wordless books this week/last week, it goes without saying that these illustrations tell the whole story AND reward close reading. I have read it at least four times and I notice new visual connections each time I reread.

I know there are a lot of Journey fans out there--what do you love about this magical tale?

 

 
Robin Smith
Robin Smith
Robin Smith is a second-grade teacher at the Ensworth School in Nashville, Tennessee. She is a reviewer for Kirkus and The Horn Book Magazine and has served on multiple award committees.
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Sam Juliano

The more I look at JOURNEY the more I believe it will win the Caldecott Medal on January 27th. If so who could complain? It's an absolute masterpiece and it's creator is one of the nicest and most humble guys out there.

Posted : Jan 08, 2014 09:36


Rebecca Smith

I fell in love with this book as soon as I set eyes on it at Candlewick's Spring 2013 preview--had to take it off the display and look through it immediately. The book did not disappoint. It's absolutely wonderful. Signed, A fan of Harold and his crayon for more than half a century

Posted : Jan 08, 2014 09:02


Betsy

Another *late* comment--I love, love, love, love this book. It's been one of my favorite reads with my kids, too, because I enjoyed how into the story they got. This is such a fantastic book for encouraging visual literacy and asking questions about what's going to happen next--because it's all in the details. We spent some time comparing the spreads at the beginning (noting how alone the girl is and how static on those steps while other kids are playing--and that the boy from the end is featured right there although it's easy to miss him) with the one at the end when the girl and boy are together on the bike (movement, friendship, etc.). Just one teensy, weensy example!

Posted : Nov 26, 2013 02:01

Robin Smith

Thanks, Betsy, for reminding me all the things I appreciate about this book--it's all in the many, many details!

Posted : Nov 26, 2013 02:01


Sam Juliano

There is one 2013 release that in my view narrowly eclipses JOURNEY. It is THE MATCHBOX DIARY, and it's absolutely gorgeous in every sense.

Posted : Nov 17, 2013 02:58


Sam Bloom

Okay, full retraction time... I was waiting on this book to get to me for about a week, and then randomly this morning I found a copy peeking out from my own branch's shelves. So I took a look, and noticed that all the characters have the samish skin tone on every page! And though the leader of the meanies has a fancy long moustache, I can see it was a case of extreme over-sensitivity to imply anything. So Aaron Becker, if you're out there and actually read this thread, I apologize for that. And I'm still blown away by the lock epiphany Eric helped me out with. Wow. I have a new dream in life: to go on a boat ride and, at some point during said ride, get raised up by a lock. So, so awesome. Okay, so I'm officially on board with this title now - hard to find anything wrong with it, I must say!

Posted : Nov 13, 2013 02:39


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